not a rescue so much as a remix, I like the orginal fine, but was curious to see what would happen if I pared it down. The end result is very much itself
the instant collapses as the coasts dissolve
memories of borders
been doing my bit for the weather
shouting down clouds
moment becomes
event I’ve been
trying to remember
old songs
throat above the present
I was in two parts of the country at the same time yesterday
the news singing
lines
there when you need
the swell built you could
see no further than where
you’d been drilled into place though
of course not the
choate fixity
a place
you’ve abandoned
fending off history
seas roar in so
words spill back
